OLD293's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[VG Exiles - Episode 2]

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I'd just like to say before I actually do the reviewing that you take criticism very well!

I've been seen this but I'm just now reviewing it lol. The action was the center point of this flash. It was pretty constant and the only time it paused was when somebody was taunting or when someone powered up, but it was brief and still kept the flow going. I like the story of different dimensions and such, simple yet complex in the way of which you are using it.

Overall great flash/sprite movie. Looking forward to the next episode =). Until then I'll be watching this to help me with my first SF sprite fight lol (I won't steal anything from you). Maybe you can watch it when it's released and give me pointers...the length of it won't be that long though.

[Goten Versus Trunks]

Just wow

I'm mad that the collab died, you probably had the best part.

The animation was consistent and fast, the action was steady and the sounds/effects were great! The only problem that I see is that you need to switch sprites. I use to use these to, but luckily someone told me that using different ones (better quality sprites in my opinion) would do better in my score. As predicted it boosted my scores tremendously.

Your sprite fights are awesome, but I think you just need to use better-looking sprites. Otherwise, your score will be lacking in what needs to be way higher. I won't take off because of that though because this is still great work.

Good job on the sprite movie/failed collab part and hope you continue to do work just as awesome =)

[Dragon Ball LULZ Collab]

Truly funny lmao!

I found this to be a truly funny flash. The drawings were good and the jokes made throughout the flash was funny and creative lol. I found the Mr. Popo one to be one of the funniest, while the one where Vegeta was getting blasted by the Kamehameha, spirit bomb, and sat on by the Oozaru (h/e you spell it) was the funniest.

Good job with the humor and thx for uploading this to Newgrounds for people like me to see. You all did a good job with your parts.

Snicp responds:

thanks :)

[DBZ: Omen]

Good but short

As a sprite artist I have to say that the animation was nice, but it was too short. If you put some length on it and some actual fighting man to man then you'd have a good sprite fight on your hands.

Other than that nice animating though.

xSTACHUx responds:

thx for the tips :] and it meant to be short

[Vegeta Vs Goku]

Nice bro

So you put this on Newgrounds too huh?

Good job, although like the guy below said the animation was basic but I know you can do way better anyway. It was still good, better than most sprite movies you see and no errors (didn't catch any).

Keep it up and forget the haters =). Looking forward to more work from you put here.

[Rock Lee Pwnage]

Refresh!

I've been seen this but I'm just now reviewing it. I'd have to say that you did a nice job with this, I especially liked the song you used lol. The cutscenes with RockLee looked good too. Hopefully you submit a couple more sprite movies (you haven't been doing any lately?) cause your getting better and better with each submission =D

[Rise Of The Fighter]

Pretty good

That was good, didn't really see any glaring errors but unless my computer is just going slow then the movements could of been just a bit more smoother. Try to up the action a bit, sprites hitting each other around without any extra effect kind of gets boring.

Overall good job though and good luck with the rest of the series

Flash-Gamers responds:

Thanks man!

[DBZ ADP Part 2.2 Prieview]

Pretty nice

This was pretty good, especially since you were using LSW sprites. I use to use those myself but someone recommended that I use different ones and my scores boosted, so I don't use those anymore. This seems like it's going to be great...can't wait for the full version.

~Merry Christmas

[Ultimate Battle Pt. 1]

Hmmm....

This needs work...I use the same sprites so if you need to see someone else with better animation then check me out (only helping). You first off need a background just so it will look better when they fight, then you need to cut the sprites out better (seen the background still on some of the poses).

Get more variety of sound effects, if you need some then PM me and I'll get to you :). Try better to place the sprites behind each other so the animation will look smoother...also get some music so you can set a battle mood.

There's more stuff to be done but this is basically the basics, if you do this then I guarantee you a higher score ;).

Hagoshi responds:

Thank you for your helpful review. About the sound effects i really would use some help... So if you still wanna help i'll PM you.